I did a Poem - it's called "who cared?"

By cuddlesthefox · Nov 9, 2008 · ·
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  1. cuddlesthefox
    Her pain was always there,
    but no one seemed to care.
    Her thoughts were always torn,
    even before they'd really formed.
    Lost,
    Like tears in the rain,
    nobody heard her fall.
    Because no one cared at all.

Comments

  1. msmogadon
    Is SWIFoxy trying to make SWIM cry again !!
  2. beena
    I'm impressed ... you should be the one doing creative writing, not me!!! Keep it up pal, there's definately a hidden talent there waiting to come out and stick two fingers up at the world!
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